Answer:
My name is Goodness
I am a girl
I am 16 years old (today)
I am tall and slim
I have a fair skin complexion
I love making new friends
and doing cool stuffs
I love singing and dancing
I am caring and honest.
I'm myself
it's me myself and I.
Hope this helps.
Good luck.
Answer:
The phrase that makes this thesis statement wordy is: electronic mail.
Explanation:
Wordiness refers to making something longer than it should be, that is, using too many words to express something. In the case of the thesis statement we are analyzing here, all words seem to be necessary with the exception of the final phrase. As we know, "electronic mail" is no longer an expression in use. It's been decades since it has been replaced by the shorter version "email", "e" standing for "electronic". Not only does using "electronic mail" make the sentence wordy, it also makes it sound old-fashioned.
What they share the most is the fact that they are Survivors, although they survived quite different experiences, they both managed to stay alive despite all odds. Juliane Koepcke survived a plane crash and eleven days in the Amazon jungle, Bill Garleb was a prisoner in the Philippines during World War II.
