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His sense to go to war is not qoth murder but thought the fine sense of the law and when not to go to war is when an individual evildoer is done and said evildoer will be punished for said evildoers's actions
-Title/first sentence not generic
-you creative words don't start a sentence with common words
-structure- introduction, 2-3 body paragraphs, conclusion
-the introduction should introduce a question
-body paragraphs should develop a line of reasoning to answer the question
-the conclusion should summarize and the answer question.
-each paragraph should have a different point
-body paragraphs should be strongest to weakest points
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