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Okay well to start off, this is a very important, and sick world. By sick, I mean the fact so many people get abused, hated, tortured, disliked, and whatever you want to call it just for being black or white and their gender. Now there's so many genders, not just boy and girl, it is jot that person's fault for being trans or anything. Judging something or someone by how they look is just sick in this world because everyone and EVERYONE matters and at the end of the day they are human beings just like us. Also, if you hate, bully, or abuse, that don't make you any of a better person. Instead, it's showing you that some people can be hateful and cruel in this world for something someone can't control. Gender, Race, Ability, and class helps us view each other by knowning to love and show kindness no matter what. It makes us a better person as 1 so we can build a better world. At the end of the day, we are all the same. At the end of the day, whatever you do and whatever you say, even if you didn't mean it or did, you still said it and that can cause harm in many ways you don't know.
<span>The Slaying of the Suitors is the event from the Odyssey which best highlights that the Ancient Greeks greatly disliked greediness. In Odysseus’ absence, suitors had been trying to court his wife, Penelope, for access to Odysseus’ wealth and lands. However, Odysseus and his son Telemachus kill all the suitors when Odysseus returns.</span>
Fatigue. It means being tired :)
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This is really good!!
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I really enjoyed your writing and I like how you have set this story up!! The story is extremely intriguing and I almost didn't want to stop reading. I love your descriptive language and it makes the story feel alive. The scenarios feel real and its easy to put yourself in the place of Winter (who is an interesting character) and feel sorry for her and her situation. The one thing I think that could help this even more is maybe some even more descriptive words when describing her running away from Cain (she heard every leaf crunch under her feet and cringed at the thought of him hearing her, she felt the cold breeze and stiff air more than ever alone in that tree and she sat in the short amount of safety that was given to her in that moment, she heard Cains manic laugh echo through the forest, ect.). I feel as though this could make that scene even more better than it already is!! :)
I love this idea and your creativity! Keep writing, this will be amazing!!
