Fezziwig is very kind and generous, while scrooge only cares about money. Fezziwig helps everyone, scrooge only cares about himself.
Fezziwig is happy, scrooge isn't.
in one scene, fezziwig hosts a dance, which is something scrooge would never do at the beginning of the book
fezziwig and scrooge are both owners of a business.
Answer:
Every time someone recalls a memory, there will be something slightly different about the memory than the last time the person was remembering it
Explanation:
Every time someone recalls a memory, there will be something slightly different about the memory than the last time the person was remembering it
^ You need this part to be past tense because it is talking about the past.
Answer:
See explanation for answer.
Explanation:
Tips:
Maybe instead of saying "ain't nothing I want more than your love" say "I want nothing more than your love" for a classier and more professional line.
I would reccommend taking out "you're a catipiller, you're becoming a beuatiful butterfly" because in my opinion it almost seems like your belittling the person you love. Try using a different metaphor.
"ill love you to the day that I die" should be "I'll love you till the day that I die" which I might also change because it sounds very similar to a line in the song "Piano Man" by Billy Joel. Just a tip.
When you say "love is all I need, love is all I want" maybe say "your love is all I need, your love is all I want"
Advice:
Try creating stanzas, it will help your poem look more finished.
Compliments:
I love the comparison "like roses you have thorns" and "like a bull I have horns" cause that's basically you admitting that you know neither of you are perfect.
I love your ending, it's very well thought out.
I hope I helped!
Have a lovely day!
Answer:
a lifestyle of little or no physical activity
hope this helped :)
