Add some more commas and periods. This might fix some run-on sentences in there.
The theme of the excerpt from Tamar is that it focuses and
enables to tell about the story of Tamar in which she was able to overcome the
struggles or obstacles that comes on her path and the way she deals with the
relationship that she has with her grandfather. With this struggles, she was
able to find a way and overcome it by finding a solution to her problem.
Answer:
Just use a thing you really liked that happened to you like You won something or you meet some or you went to a place.