I believe the answer is:
1. Ivan Ilyich wanted to weep, wanted to be petted and cried over, and then his colleague Shebek would come, and instead of weeping and being petted, Ivan Ilyich would assume a serious, severe, and profound air.
2. "This falsity around him and within him did more than anything else to poison his last days
From the first sentence, the narrator infer that even when a member of rising middle class is experiencing grief, they are forced to hide it due to the concern of their social standing.
From the second sentence, the narrator infers that unability to express emotion started to eating them from the inside and make them miserable.
Explanation:
it was a fun day going hiking with my family. We decided to have an experience by traveling through the woods. In other words it could be described as a huge forest. We entered the forest and went further deep in to it admiring every single view of it... After some time,the forest started getting misty...until fog happened to cover the whole area. I was told to stay calm but the fear of being unable to see anyone made me nervous anx stiff. I was scared and started calling my parents to come near me. But their voices were not to be heard.!They were not anywhere near me. I yelled hopelessly. It felt like my head was going to burst with all the worries and stress. Who's going to save me now? Would I ever be lucky enough to meet my family? Such thoughts started striking in my head .... I could hear animals making wierd noises....But what if I was going to be one of their <u>preys</u><u>.</u><u>?</u><u>.</u><u>.</u><u>(</u>check the spelling).
<u> </u>I started sweating...sweat rolled over my body, the breeze was warning in my ears.
I could slightly see tall trees sorrounding me... the fog had stared to dissapear....I was still alone... my phone showed no signals....
To my mere luck I heard someone calling my name from faraway.. .. I ran towards that direction.... and their was my mother . I ran as fast as the wind towards her and into her arms..... this was an experience thet i might never forget...etc
u can also put it as a dream and end it up with u waking up from tge dream
I believe that B. would be inappropriate in formal writing because its just kind of rude to say. I would re-word it as: "He dislikes being late" or something like that because "hate" is just a cruel and informal word to use.
Hope this helps!!! (:
The reason writers should take a break between writing the first draft and the revising stage is so to have a fresh perspective on what they have written<span>. Too often after writing a first draft, writers feel a strong connection to their work and are not welcome enough to begin the critiquing process. They are still in the same mindset of what they just created and do not want to change it or cannot see it from a different perspective that may benefit the work. Thus, they should take a break and come back to it later when they are refreshed and able to critique their work in order to revise it. </span>
