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Even though this question is missing the options, after analyzing the revision we can safely say it was made for <u>conciseness</u>.
Explanation:
Conciseness can be simply defined as saying a lot in just a few words. Notice how the original paragraph is much longer than the revised one. The writer gave much more information than what was truly necessary. Details such as "and that new procedures need to be initiated" and "who was sympathetic" are superfluous. The first one adds nothing of value. If the procedures are inadequate, it is quite obvious that new ones need to be initiated. Readers could infer that. The second one is permeated with subjectivity, not only making the paragraph longer, but also stating an opinion that in uncalled for in this context. By eliminating the extra words, the writer made the paragraph concise, using fewer words to express the necessary.
When finding an interjection, think about comics. An interjection is exclamation that is used to express a feeling. When finding an interjection, think about comics and all the expressions they use like 'bam', 'pow', etc. Like I said, one of the cheats to finding an interjection is to think about comic books.
Answer: C) Wow
<span>In Socrates, Condemned to Death, Addresses His Judges, also known as Apologia (The Apology), Socrates deserts his course of questioning and challenging answers.
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The primary antagonists of the play include the Capulet and Montague families, whose longstanding feud restricts Romeo and Juliet's freedom and ultimately thwarts their love
