In my opinion there isn’t, but maybe change warm to warmth in the first paragraph?
Teaching and Spoken Instruction Rubric Exceeds Expectation (3) Meets Expectation (2) Approaches Expectation (1) Total Score Introduction The introduction is inviting, states the main topic, and clearly establishes the goal of the manual. The introduction attempts to be inviting, states the topic, and establishes the goal of the manual. The introduction includes the topic and establishes the goal of the manual. Sequencing The details are placed in a logical order, and the way they are presented effectively conveys the necessary information. The details are placed in a logical order, but the way in which they are presented sometimes makes the writing less clear. Some necessary details may be missing or unclear. Word Choice The text is written as commands using active and appropriate verbs; needless words are omitted. The text is written as commands using appropriate verbs; most unnecessary language is omitted. The text is not written as commands or includes many unnecessary words. Recognition of Audience, Purpose, and Context The writer has considered the audience, purpose, and context of the piece and made necessary adjustments to the reading level, technicality, and length. The writer has considered the audience, purpose, or context and has made most necessary adjustments to the reading level, technicality, and length. The writer has considered the audience, purpose, or context but has not made all of the necessary adjustments.
Answer:
He feels society in general, including many members of the congregation, is more sinful now than ever.
Explanation:
"Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God" is a sermon written by the American Christian theologian Jonathan Edwards, preached to his own congregation in Northampton, Massachusetts, to profound effect,[1] and again on July 8, 1741 in Enfield, Connecticut. The preaching of this sermon was the catalyst for the First Great Awakening.[2] Like Edwards' other works, it combines vivid imagery of Hell with observations of the world and citations of the scripture. It is Edwards' most famous written work, is a fitting representation of his preaching style,[3] and is widely studied by Christians and historians, providing a glimpse into the theology of the First Great Awakening of c. 1730–1755.
This was a highly influential sermon of the Great Awakening, emphasizing God’s wrath upon unbelievers after death to a very real, horrific, and fiery Hell. [4] The underlying point is that God has given humans a chance to confess their sins. It is the mere will of God, according to Edwards, that keeps wicked men from being overtaken by the devil and his demons and cast into the furnace of hell - “like greedy hungry lions, that see their prey, and expect to have it, but are for the present kept back [by God’s hand].” Mankind’s own attempts to avoid falling into the “bottomless gulf” due to the overwhelming “weight and pressure towards hell” are insufficient as “a spider's web would have to stop a falling rock“. This act of grace from God has given humans a chance to believe and trust in Christ.[5] Edwards provides much varied and vivid imagery to illustrate this main theme throughout.
Answer:
Needless or unconscious reading
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