It seems like it would be childish
Well naturally, the two people should meet in the beginning. They ultimately need to fall in love so your story can later determine if it’s “fate” or just “love” they’re experiencing. If you’ve been in love before, that should help you write. Never answering the question “fate or love” could be cool too. Leave the reader to decide... but that’s more of an ending lol.
You can make the couple meet online, in person, naturally, on accident, literally however. In my opinion a long distance relationship might solidify the question “fate or love” simply because in a LDR (long distance relationship) the two can be so deeply in love, but so far away. This almost forces you to think “is this relationship fate, or are they just in love?” You need conflict definitely. Provoke the mind to ask this question. You can do it!!
POINT OF VIEW · The narrator speaks in the first person, noting his observations of the war and his brother's involvement
TONE · Matter-of-fact; conversational; sometimes childish
TENSE · Past
SETTING (TIME) · 1775–1779; epilogue, 1826
SETTING (PLACE)<span> · Redding, Connecticut and nearby areas
</span>TIME AND PLACE WRITTEN<span> · Early 1970s, United States
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The definition of tranquility that is most likely suited for this line is calmness: peacefulness.
That is what the word tranquil means.
