Okay so I see some errors. Like<span> "he actually wrapped my arm in a bandage-like way once he thought" this is worded weirdly and awkwardly. Work on your comma's through out the piece.
It is very funny, especially the end I enjoyed it.
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Hi! you can " Incoperate" eveidence into your writing by direct quotes, that you pull from a text. Or by Primary, or secondary sources. Primary means "first"" most important", Secondary means " second" " lesser value" - I hope this helps.
1) choice ; a person or a thing chosen or that may be chosen
2) expectations ; a strong belief that something will happen or be the case in the future.
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1)- I had a choice between a dog or a cat
2)- Jane thought that all the expectations were a burden to her.
The associated or secondary meaning of a word or expression in addition to its explicit or primary meaning: A possible connotation of “home” is “a place of warmth, comfort, and affection.”.
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if this is for me to answer i would say
In the summer I went on holiday to Spain with my mum, dad, brothers, sisters and niece and nephew and we had an amazing time there. We went to the beach when it was hot and sunny and we had ice cream where it melted so quickly we needed to go and buy another ice cream and we made sand castles and played in the sea and after we went the beach we went to the pier and bought some sweets and played at the fair. Sadly, we had to go home but we had lots of fun and played lots of games.
