What is your hook currently? and what are your other reasons of why breaking the rules is a good thing?
The first time I read the novel “Tangerine”, I couldn’t put it down.
Charles Babbage, who was born in 1791, is regarded as the father of computing because of his research into machines that could calculate. Babbage's Difference Engine Number 1 was the first device ever devised that could calculate and print mathematical tables.
you use diolouge to set a tone since the character has to react to different tye of events.