Answer:
1.one eat ( should be a type of animal/maybe a rat)
2.foet should be feet
3.I and Fred -> Fred and I, or me and Fred, the first is more correct though
4.had wenr -> was missing, was gone. had dissapeared. so many better options
5. The final sentence can be fixed in numerous ways, though I'd rephrase to something like this : Fred was missing, and there were less gerbils in the cage.
6.Amanda's pet-sitting business was going well she was now taking care of two dogs, one eat, and several gerbils. <- This sentence could also be updated. into this -> 6.Amanda's pet-sitting business was going well! She was now taking care of two dogs, one [fix], and several gerbils. <- This sentence could also be updated.
7.If the first 3 words cannot be changed ignore this. but I would get rid of "LOST" as well
8."I and Fred will get along just fine<em>,</em><em>"</em><em> </em><em>add</em><em> </em><em>comma</em>
9. Rephrase this sentence, "Amanda found the tank lid off the next morning when she got up." -> "When Amanda got up the next morning, she found the tank lid off."
Explanation:
Missing Boa! LOST <em>Amanda's pet-sitting business was going well she was now taking care of two dogs, one eat, and several gerbils. </em>It didn't seem to be a problem when Jose asked her to watch his cobra, Fred. Fred was two <em>foet</em> in length and spotted. "<em>I and Fred</em> will get along just fine" she said. Fred curled up in the corner of his tank and went to sleep. <em>Amanda found the tank lid off the next morning when she got up</em>. Fred <em>had went</em>. <em>Also, there seemed to be fewer gerbils in the next cage.</em> (PET BOA CONSTRICTOR 10 FEET LONG, BROWN & WHITE SPOTS. VERY FOND OF SMALL RODENTS IF FOUND, CONTACT AMANDAS PET-SITTING SERVICE. 555-3678 FRED Amanda has tacked up a poster to advertise for Jose's missing snake.)
