Question

9. Missing Boa! LOST Amanda's pet-sitting business was going well she was now taking care of two dogs, one eat, and several gerbils. It didn't seem to be a problem when Jose asked her to watch his cobra, Fred. Fred was two foet in length and spotted. "I and Fred will get along just fine" she said. Fred curled up in the corner of his tank and went to sleep. Amanda found the tank lid off the next morning when she got up. Fred had went. Also, there seemed to be fewer gerbils in the next cage. (PET BOA CONSTRICTOR 10 FEET LONG, BROWN & WHITE SPOTS. VERY FOND OF SMALL RODENTS IF FOUND, CONTACT AMANDAS PET-SITTING SERVICE. 555-3678 FRED Amanda has tacked up a poster to advertise for Jose's missing snake.)
find the 6 incorrections the text in parentheses doesn't have any incorrections​

Answer 1

Answer:

1.one eat ( should be a type of animal/maybe a rat)

2.foet should be feet

3.I and Fred -> Fred and I, or me and Fred, the first is more correct though

4.had wenr -> was missing, was gone. had dissapeared. so many better options

5. The final sentence can be fixed in numerous ways, though I'd rephrase to something like this : Fred was missing, and there were less gerbils in the cage.

6.Amanda's pet-sitting business was going well she was now taking care of two dogs, one eat, and several gerbils. <- This sentence could also be updated. into this -> 6.Amanda's pet-sitting business was going well! She was now taking care of two dogs, one [fix], and several gerbils. <- This sentence could also be updated.

7.If the first 3 words cannot be changed ignore this. but I would get rid of "LOST" as well

8."I and Fred will get along just fine," add comma

9. Rephrase this sentence, "Amanda found the tank lid off the next morning when she got up." -> "When Amanda got up the next morning, she found the tank lid off."

Explanation:

Missing Boa! LOST Amanda's pet-sitting business was going well she was now taking care of two dogs, one eat, and several gerbils. It didn't seem to be a problem when Jose asked her to watch his cobra, Fred. Fred was two foet in length and spotted. "I and Fred will get along just fine" she said. Fred curled up in the corner of his tank and went to sleep. Amanda found the tank lid off the next morning when she got up. Fred had went. Also, there seemed to be fewer gerbils in the next cage. (PET BOA CONSTRICTOR 10 FEET LONG, BROWN & WHITE SPOTS. VERY FOND OF SMALL RODENTS IF FOUND, CONTACT AMANDAS PET-SITTING SERVICE. 555-3678 FRED Amanda has tacked up a poster to advertise for Jose's missing snake.)