Question

Can someone please help me? My teacher said i needed more evidence and reasoning, so can some one help me?

Answer 1

Answer:

Maybe adding more details to your story? Or talk more about the phrase itself.

Explanation:

Adding more details based on how you felt, and longing the consequences could be beneficial here. Besides that, possibly adding another story? If you don't have one, then think about a famous story that deepens within your paper. Also, maybe make another paragraph or two to talk about the meaning of the phrase. That's my biggest idea for you, good luck! (sorry if this wasn't very helpful, I'm a seventh grader.)

(here's an example, this is just how I pictured it. feel free to use it:D)

"The phrase itself is very important; when used, it is most likely in the persons best interest that the other person in the conversation stays safe. For example, you would want your friend to stay safe if they were participating in dangerous activities without proper equipment. Risks aren't always the best solution, and that is what the phrase is creating awareness for."