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I think it is good. However, I think it would be better if you had explained the description of Alice and Edgar before you went into the part with "Alice stared at Edgar with warm but concerned eyes. He glanced back at her and quietly asked, "What's wrong, Mama?".
I thought this because it went from William to Alice/Edgar which was kind of a confusing jump (I thought Alice was the wife). Overall, it was really good.
The word choices create a reflective and solemn tone—- encouraging the reader to think about old age and loss… it is melancholy and sad to think about what will not be any more.
Common law follows the past rulings of judges. This means that when a country follows common law traditions, past cases that are considered similar to new cases are used by the presiding judge as basis to make a decision and ruling over the latter. Common law traditions are considered 'uncodified' because they do not use a specific set of legal rules and statutes for their court cases.
Because of the logic of swiss family robinson
Carmen, you don't want to text and drive. Reason being there has been multiple occasions where deaths have been reported from a texting and driving situation. What a tragic death to die to be gone in an instant and to put other people at risk. If you live through an accident and kill the hit person you can lose your license and go to jail for a long time. Are you willing to do all that for one text?