-The freezing rain stung my skin as I briskly walked home from school.
-Shawna's hostility toward me was revealed by her cold stare and crossed arms.
-Charles felt his ears and cheeks grow red as he scrambled to pick his lunch up off the floor.
<span>determine your purpose for writing</span>
In this paragraph, a white puddle is a simile for snow. If the sentence where white puddle is mentioned is this one: Patches of old snow, scattered here and there, looked like white puddles.
I could answer if you could write it a little better