It seems the second answer you have provided for this question is the best fit for what the question is specifically asking. Have a great day!
Answer:
Hi <u>Insert Friend's Name,</u>
Can I please use your library to finish my project? I really need to use it, and I'll return any books that I've used. Thank you so much!
Your friend, <u>Insert Your Name</u>
Explanation:
<em>hope this helps have a nice day</em>
Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm Box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the Chicago fire of 1871.
This is the best example of adding concrete details. It specifically says which alarm box Schaffer told his assistant. The original sentence makes it seem as the miscommunication was the big problem. While it was a problem, the fact that the firefighters went to the incorrect location is really the reason the Chicago fire of 1871 was so devastating. Including these details makes the writing much clearer and easier for the reader to follow.
He withholds the fact that the falling horseman is the father of the shooter. Enjoy!
