That is true If I am wrong I apologize I have failed you
The allied countries were not correct in choosing to
refuse Jewish victims refugee status during World War II. They could have saved
some of the Jewish people during the war. The reason could be that they felt
that if they gave the Jews a safe haven, their resources would diminish.
Answer:
By just reading the beginning, I can tell it's pretty good! A few suggestions: Try not to use "also" in the beginning of a sentence. I feel like it sounds a bit unprofessional. This sort of goes for "this also". One last thing, when putting in the name of an article for example, make sure to put quotes. I would also recommend to state where you cited textual evidence, not really for articles, but just for the future. Besides that, looking good!
I know it's pretty late but I thought I'd still respond
