Example of a sentence that most needs to be revised because it's description is too vague is : we hike two miles uphill in the blooming forest.
Usually, you hike on the mountain not in the blooming forest.
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the phase war is kind means war brings peace to people and countries
What is the main purpose of using evidence in your writing?
Select one:
In order to provide facts or quotations from a text to support your
claim
They used a railroad car.
I think it is Martha because there is no Mary.
