The revision that would help expand the ideas in the excerpt
above would be adding more specifics about the sailors' beliefs about the
island.
 
To add, the Most Dangerous Game opens with a conversation
between two men—Whitney and
Rainsford. 
 
        
                    
             
        
        
        
The second one I'm pretty sure
        
             
        
        
        
Sad
brailiest and thanks and rating please
        
             
        
        
        
This question is mostly interpretative. However, the majority could agree that the most appropriate answer would be C, as the figurative language and imagery used by the author are used in a manner that they're descriptive enough to keep the suspense of the scene, but not long enough to distract the audience from the events of the plot.