Answer:
Dr. Naismith first planned to bring outdoor games inside, but they were too physical and cumbersome.
Explanation:
Eliminate repeated words.
Other comments:
'Two' is a number. 'Too' means extra or more than expected-- too many, too much, too late. . .
Two should not be too many to count!
Also be careful to use correct verb forms (planned) (were) to express past tense.
Time flies:clasue
forgive and forget:phrase
whentime comes to a stop:clause
before midnight:phrase
According to Haidri, to "recollect the emotion itself" it is necessary to understand the deeper sensation that an incident provoked.
Although you haven't shown it, we can see that this question refers to "Lottery" written by Rasma Haidri.
By reading this essay, we can see that:
- The author reflects on what it is to write and edit poetry.
- She claims that a poem is a difficult text and must be written very carefully.
- That's because to write poetry efficiently, the author needs to collect, remember emotions.
- This process consists of recalling an incident that occurred and thinking about the deepest emotion that the incident provided.
The depth of that emotion is what allows a poem to be written in a meaningful way.
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The second one, grubby! Good luck!
