Line 4: "Mayza," she said, "I saw you at the practice run yesterday, and I was very impressed with your ability. I am hoping to see you at try-outs this afternoon. You know, there are scholarships available for winning students this year
I saw you at the practice run yesterday, and I was very impressed with your ability. I am hoping to see you at try-outs this afternoon. You know, there are scholarships available for winning students this year.
Each guide was helpful, but we forgot to thank them. You should use the plural pronoun, because we don't know whether the guides were only males, or females, or whether there were both sexes.
