Hi!
The sentence that would need re-reading would be sentence 4 or the last one.
Hope this helps !
I would say the first sentence is grammatically correct
Answer:
1. The speaker is in a contemplative mood.
2. The word 'turn' in this context means being born into the fold of animals instead of humans. It is a sort of reincarnation.
3. The speaker wishes to live with animals because they are calm, not easily upset, and contented.
4. Alliteration was employed in the words- long and long.
Explanation:
1. The poet Walt Whitman was likely contemplating or thinking to himself of all the attributes of animals which made them pleasing to him.
2. As a human, if he was to turn and live with animals, that would mean no longer being born as a human but rather being born into the fold of animals.
3. The speaker wishes to live with the animals because they are 'placid and self contain'd' which means that they are calm and not easily upset. They are also contented and do not drag each other for worldly possessions.
4. Alliteration is the repetition of the first letters or sounds of a string of words in a phrase. The letter repeated by the speaker is 'l'.
You have to pick something emotional and personal to yourself or maybe something you’ve seen and the intent is to make the reader feel something specific: sad, mad, happy. Emotional with positive connotations are happiness and eagerness, excitement, memorization. Emotions insinuating a negative connotations would be: anger, fear, jealousy, guilt. I hope that helps it says a few lines so just make sure when you’re describe or achieve a specific emotional effect, just remember to use words that coincide with whatever emotion you’re trying to hey across
