Question

Can you help me with the grammar please!

Answer 1

Mid-dreaming, I jolted awake to a strange sound. It reminded me of static or air waves buzzing around my tent. My eyes became fixated on the zipper in which was opening up the tent, seemingly on its own. Frightened, I see a bald-headed, green creature, who resembled a person, staring back at me.

It looked at me, I looked at it.

His voice spoke out words I could barely comprehend. It sounded like an invite to a house party of some sort.

Next thing I knew was I have teleported to a new room. It was filled with gears and robotic-like gadgets. There were buttons and neon lights surrounding me.

All of the sudden, I realized I was not alone.

Answer 2

Answer:

As I was falling asleep, I heard a weird sound. It sounded like air waves and static. Suddenly, I noticed my tent opening up; I was extremely surprised and frightened to see a peculiar green creature with a smooth, bald head.

We stared at each other, and the next thing I know, he invited me to a house party in a robotic looking room. There were buttons and lights all over the place, and I realized that I wasn't alone in this...

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