This paragraph is super... choppy. It needs to be more fluid. Also, the hook is, well, not present. They have a good start with "Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories." You should build more on this idea of why gardening makes you happy. Through these memories you could share what you gain from gardening, and why you should stop thinking just about the time it takes but also the profit you can earn. To get rid of this "choppiness" you connect through the memories.
Hope this helps!
I would say A or D if not right I’m sorry
One man that was powerful from 1649-1658 was Oliver Cromwell because he led the Roundhead army.
Answer:
it looks really good
Explanation:
if you wrote it you did a very good job
We need context whats the paragraph
