It looks good. I'm in AP English. You need a little bit more detail! But other that it looks good!
Are there choices ? How am I supposed to help you out if there are no choices to choose from
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The Children's Story depicts the enormous power of teachers, for good or for bad. It's frightening to think how a child's mind is susceptible to being manipulated so easily by the authority figures they trust. Schools are supposed to be places of learning, not places of political indoctrination.
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I can’t think of a way to rewrite it cause it’s so confusing
