Question

Hey so I’m writing a new song called “why do I try” so if you could tell me what you think of it so far I would appreciate it thanks.
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You sit there on
The mountains side
while I sit
here and cry
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You live there
While I slowly die
on this side
Why do I even try
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Used to be your wings
But now you can fly
Used to your rock
But now your fine
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Used to be your savior
But but now you
Say your alive
Why do I even try
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Always falling down
Help you up and you
Push,
push me away
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Always drowning
Keep you afloat and you
Dive,
dive away
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Always crying
hold you and I
always,
always stay
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Even though that I know
You don’t really
care,
care for me
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Why do I even try
When you say
I love you
I try to believe your lies
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When you say
Your the only
one for me
I try to believe your lies
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When you say
You’re never gonna
turn your back on me
I know that you lie
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But I don’t want you to apologize
Trapped in this loop of time
There’s no compromise
why do I even try
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Your rising top never gonna stop
And I’m trapped at the bottom trying to get up
Is it better to go solo
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Because I dont know
When your gonna need me again
Is it better to go solo
And now I’m
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Stranded at the bottom
Freezing in the cold
Bleeding from my wounds
Blinded and alone
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And now I know that it time to go
You dont need any more
Your heart hardened into stone
Your eyes are as cold as snow
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You sit there on
The mountains side
while I sit
here and cry
——————————————————————
You live there
While I slowly die
on this side
Why do I even try
——————————————————————
Used to be your wings
But now you can fly
Used to your rock
But now your fine
——————————————————————
Used to be your savior
But but now you
Say your alive
Why do I even try
——————————————————————
Always falling down
Help you up and you
Push,
push me away
——————————————————————
Always drowning
Keep you afloat and you
Dive,
dive away
——————————————————————
Always crying
hold you and I
always,
always stay
——————————————————————
Even though that I know
You don’t really
care,
care for me
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Answer 1

That is really good

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