The quality is good.
No passive voice.
In the beginning, it all began with Ralph Baer in 1967 in Nashua, NH. In 1966, while working for Sanders Associates Inc., engineer Ralph Baer began to investigate how to play games on TV. (add examples of investigations, don't add too much cuz it is gonna get too wordy)And as a result of his investigations Brown Box was created. According to the G-Phoria Legend Award, “Baer is considered "the Father of Video Games due to his many contributions to games and helping to spark the video game industry in the latter half of the 20th century”. Little did we know this great invention would be in everyone's life today.
I would say you should tell the reader some of the investigations he made, possibly some examples.
Answer:
Haida's are from the passage "The Raven and the First Men: The Beginnings of the Haida." The island's location made them depend on each other.
What is Haida island?
Haida Gwaii island is located in Canada and has a temperate rainforest. The nations or the ethnic group of the island are called Haida. The location of the island affected their relationship.
Because of the location the people relied on each other and were dependent which made them have a close bond. The location kept them safer from the other groups and made them trust each other.
Therefore, the location of the island made their bond stronger.
Romeo and Juliet is very best drama Shakespeare legacy
I think evidence.
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