<span><span>Have I studied my subject with sufficient care so that I understand what qualities in it caused my initial response, and have I studied it with sufficient care so that I have deepened or otherwise changed that response?
</span><span>Is the title of my essay at least moderately informative?
</span><span>Is the opening paragraph interesting and, by its end, have I focused on the topic?
</span><span>Do I state my main point (thesis) soon enough--perhaps even in the title--and do I keep it in view throughout my essay?
</span><span>Is the organization reasonable? Does each point lead to the next without irrelevancies?
</span><span>Does each paragraph revolve around a topic idea, a criterion that directly supports my thesis?
</span><span>Are generalizations or assertions about personal responses supported by illustrative examples, concrete evidence, research, etc.?
</span><span>Are the sentences concise, clear, and emphatic?
Are needless words and inflated language eliminated?
</span><span>Is the final paragraph conclusive without being repetitive?
</span><span>Are the quotes and paraphrases accurate?
Is credit given to sources?
Are copies of relevant sources included and important passages highlighted?
</span><span>Are long quotes really necessary?
</span><span>Has the essay been proofread?
Are spelling and punctuation correct?</span></span>
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The fluid heated
Travels away from its source
Energy moving
A haiku consists of seventeen syllables. It's consists of three lines. The first line is made up of five syllables, the second line is made up of seven syllables and the third is again made up of five syllables. It does not rhyme and the usual themes are about nature. Convection is when a heated fluid like air or liquid moves away from where it originated and a transfer of energy takes place. Above would be a haiku about convection.
Answer:
Well is this from a story and if so I would need to know what story
Explanation:
Answer:
- "Is my team plowing" = Are my horses still working?
- "That I use to drive" = The way I used to drive them to plow the land
- "And hear the harness jingle" = While listening to the harness noises.
- "When I was man alive?" = When was I still alive?
- "Ay, the horses trample," = The horses continue to work hard.
- "The harness jingles now;" = And the harness continues to make noise
- "No change though you lie under" = Everything is the same, except your presence
- "The land you use to plow." = On the land you used to plow.
Explanation:
Firstly, it is important to highlight the meaning of paraphrasing. To paraphrase is to use a sentence and rewrite it keeping the original meaning, but using different words, as was done in the poem above.
The poem provides the conversation between a dead man and his friend, who is still alive. In the first three verses, the man wants to know what is happening in the land that he plowed, cared for and cultivated. He wants to know if everything is as he left it. The latest verses describe the friend's response, who says that everything is the same, except for the presence of the man who is now dead.
