Yea its a great thesis stamen make sure you have punctuation and vocabulary
Answer:
Fish are a great pet to have. They are fun to watch as they swim around the tank you put them in. Although fish tanks, heaters, filters, and other supplies aren't super cheap, the best part, the fish, are not very expensive at all. And the more you get into it the better it becomes. You may start with a 3-gallon tank and end up with a 20-gallon tank.
Explanation:
A verb is a a word used to describe an action, state, or occurrence.
This is really an opinion thing. But say Jay Gatsby, because he knows how to have a fun time.
Answer:
1) She walked to the woods on a dark and stormy night, she had a really bad feeling about this. This was the night her future was about to be changed forever. If only she listened to her gut...
2) She walks into the woods as the rain pours down on her, it's pitch black and she has no idea where she's going, or what is waiting for her at the end of the trail...
3) She will walk into the woods as rain pours down at her, the sky will be pitch black as she struggles to find her way. She will tremble with fear as she walks to the end of the trail.
What you gotta do:
Choose the paragraph you like the best for the last question.
the story:
The story is about <u>A girl</u><u><em>(or guy if you want to change pronouns)</em></u><u> who is lost on a dark and stormy night, she enters a trail hoping to find a way out as she trembles with fear. She has a really bad feeling about this but still continues on the path. At the end of the trail, an old lady offers to help but little does she know the old lady is actually a kidnapper. the old lady takes the girl to her home and gives her a room to stay in. the girl looks around in the room when she stumbles across a dead body under the bed. suddenly she realizes this is not you sweet old lady but really the devil in disguise. The girl can't escape because the window is locked so later that night she puts the body on top of the bed making it a decoy. she waits under the bed. sure enough, the lady is back and viciously stabs the dead body multiple times. when the lady leaves the girl runs out of the house lucky and glad to make it out alive. She walks down the main road to find a bustling city, she finds a police station and explains what happens, the next day they arrest the old lady and return her[the girl] home.</u>
You can change the pronouns and add a name, also I know the ending is a little dry.. you can edit it all to your liking
