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Today was quite the experience. I'm feel very euphoric about having to go through with it. My family and I woke up at five in the morning to leave for the airport, the start to my great adventure! I had hardly slept the night before due to all the excitement I was feeling about flying in an airplane for the first time. Once we had got to the airport, I could see all the big airplanes and how amazing they looked up close. But the excitement of the big planes had died down when we got into the actual thing, to put it bluntly, it wasn't as cool as I had hoped. On the ride to our destination, there was a lot of turbulence and my mother had begun to grow nervous. I wasn't very aware of this thought because I was enjoying the roller-coaster of a ride. As the plane was getting closer to landing, I looked out the window to see all the majestic clouds rolling by below us, I thought it was amazing! I imagined reaching out to touch them, feeling how soft they were. When the plane had flown into the clouds, it was all foggy, a interesting experience. As we exited the cloudy part of the ride, I could see the huge city! It was an impowering feeling and so beautiful to see it from above. I'm extremely happy to have gone on this tip and hope to feel this way again fairly soon!

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