this is my final and i just want suggestions/opinions on it. thx, btw sorry for the small pictures, i hope you can see them alri

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Dmitrij [34]

3 years ago

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this is my final and i just want suggestions/opinions on it. thx, btw sorry for the small pictures, i hope you can see them alri

ght <3333

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2 answers:

-BARSIC- [3] · Answer 1 · 2022-04-15T02:36:12+03:00

-BARSIC- [3]3 years ago

6 0

Answer:

Explanation:

Hey yes i can see them fine because i zoomed in, but it looks very good and you made no grammar or puncuation errors. i think you did better than I would have looks great have a good day

anastassius [24] · Answer 2 · 2022-04-15T04:41:00+03:00

anastassius [24]3 years ago

3 0

Answer:

1. Try making the sword bigger on 4

2. Is there supposed to be anything on 5?

3. Make sure you have references

I like all the visuals