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The description during the horse race improves the scene by making me feel as though I am in the action and experiencing events at the same time Paul is. I can see Paul taking note of what is around him as he and the grey pass one horse at a time. The description of the horse sizzling like lightning makes Paul's win seem really exciting.
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B
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He isn't saying "I shouted" and we don't know if we can hear the persons thoughts, so it's third person
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That doesn’t make any sense, do you mind rephrasing it?
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