Last month, I hiked to the peak of a mountain. Next month, my best friend and her sister are going to visit that site too. It's a difficult trip, but it's worth it. They're going to have so much fun there! I hope I can go back again soon.
Answer:
Even though this question is missing the options, after analyzing the revision we can safely say it was made for <u>conciseness</u>.
Explanation:
Conciseness can be simply defined as saying a lot in just a few words. Notice how the original paragraph is much longer than the revised one. The writer gave much more information than what was truly necessary. Details such as "and that new procedures need to be initiated" and "who was sympathetic" are superfluous. The first one adds nothing of value. If the procedures are inadequate, it is quite obvious that new ones need to be initiated. Readers could infer that. The second one is permeated with subjectivity, not only making the paragraph longer, but also stating an opinion that in uncalled for in this context. By eliminating the extra words, the writer made the paragraph concise, using fewer words to express the necessary.
Answer:
because I like to make others happy, meanwhile it’s something I can’t be..
Answer: It’s specific to a single artistic work and doesn’t overlap with other similar works.
Answer:
The correct answer to the following question will be option B (Buttercup).
Explanation:
- The stranger has been trying to make fun of that same horse of D'Artagnan, due to the extreme manner his friends giggle to respond.
- Because once D'Artagnan gets to hear the random person consider his horse a buttercup making reference to either the horse's odd coloring, he turned and looked out again and begins a struggle mostly with passerby.
The other choices have no relation with the specified scenario. So that he calls him a Buttercup.
