O clock should be o' clock, would'nt should be wouldn't, and "whomever was in the know," is messed up
Other powerful countries had been attacked and defeated
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Answer:
The chilling cold almost chopped him apart like how the butcher slaughters the livestock.
Explanation:
I rly hope this helps lol it has an alliteration and a simile
yes. thanks for the points :)