Answer:
The parapragh is corrected. I'm not the best but I tried my best:)
Explanation:
The novel "The Strange case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde" by Robert Louis Stevenson is a book which tells a story about an old doctor with mental issues and has the ability to shapshift into another person by a sip of a potion. Utterson, his long time friend, is taking time in investigating in this mysterious and puzzling case. However, the storyline of this novel is not realistic and it is easy to tell that it is a work of fiction.
Firstly, regarding the realism of the story, I did not really appreciate it because for me it's not realistic at all. Not just because of the science fiction element, which is normal for this genre to not be realistic, but because of the story in general without considering the science fiction element. For example, we know that Dr. Jekyll is a sociopathic criminal who is murdering people, but the police in the novel are not taking this seriously. It is not normal that in a situation, like in the novel, the police are not very engage while realistically speaking, the police should be doing thier best to solve the case.
Secondly, we can asume that Utterson have many clues and hints to help him the identity of Mr. Hyde, Jekyll, yet he did not manage to find out. It was just as if he did not consider and actually thought about the clues that was given to him, and that is another example of something not being realistic. People might just think that Utterson may not be not very smart but he, as a lawyer, should be able to point out the answer based on the clues.
Finally, another example that proves the story is not realistic is, in chapter 6, Utterson did not open and read the letter from his friend, Lanyon, who had passed away. The letter was a part of the strange case of Jekyll and although that he was told not to open it, I wonder how his curiosity did not take over him like normal humans let thier curiosity take over them. The letter being something that relates to the case was also another reason for it to be opened and read yet Utterson resisted and left it unopened.
This is the finished edited version I did for you and I'm also going to add a conclusion for you since most essays have one and I'm not exaclty sure why you didn't have one.
"The Strange case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde" is definitely strange. The story and actions of the characters were not what a normal human would do in real life. Although that the genre is science fiction, the decisions of the characters were not realistic. There is no logical explanation on the reason behind it. All in all, the novel by Robert Louis Stevenson has a confusing storyline.
I changed some of the phrases to make them sound better but just a reminder that you don't have to. It sounds more professional to me but it might not for you so change what you think should be changed since this essay isn't mine. I really hoped this helped and your english level is already really good, I just think that you should practice some more on the grammer part:)
