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Ostrovityanka [42]
3 years ago
11

Can you revise my essay and tell me the errors in it.

English
2 answers:
irinina [24]3 years ago
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For the conclusion make it like this|

In conclusion Tam Lin...
harina [27]3 years ago
4 0

Answer:

U did amazing work but is ejjit part of the paragraph?

Explanation:  I like your essay it's really awesome!

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