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velikii [3]
2 years ago
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Not sure if it is ok not to ask this but can someone proofread this and give suggestions or comments about please. Its for Penn

Foster Personal Narrative and Written Communication
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Zolol [24]2 years ago
3 0

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its really good

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I dont personally think it needs to be fixed

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