The reason for a persuasive essay is to convince the audience to your point, so if the audience is not convinced with you point then your persuasive writing is not good, if the audience is convinced, then your writing is good.
Its hard to explain why but,to be anxious to do somthing.
Im not sure look it up:)
Answer:
The answer is B.
Explanation:
Instead of the second comma, there should be a period and the rest should be a new sentence.