You should underline <u>The Bluest Eye</u> and other book titles instead of putting a quotation. Also, I think your last sentence is incomplete. You also need to put some commas in long sentences to prevent a run-on sentence.
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The impact that the words <em>feared</em> and <em>hatred </em>in the chapter 17 of The Prince have on the meaning of the passage is that they suggest that a ruler who is feared can retain power, while a ruler who is hated is less likely to do so.
In this chapter, Machiavelli establishes an important distinction between 'feared' and 'hatred'. The author argues that a prince should make himself feared by the masses but not hated. Moreover,<u> he states that one way of avoid being hatred is leaving his citizens' property intact</u>. According to Machiavelli, it is important to avoid being hatred because, unlike being feared, <u>a hated prince is more likely to lose his power due to the angry masses</u>.
How did you put this in English section?????
<span>A. When is not answered.
(You could also argue that E: Where is not answered, although it is implied that it will be done nationally)
The sentence tells Who: The National Cereal Corporation, What: a free picture book, Where: Nationally, and Why: to promote reading</span>
