Read Kai’s brainstorming table. Beginning: The chain on my bike became loose while I was riding with my friends. Middle: My frie
nds and I tried to fix the chain, but we just made the problem worse. End: I took a bicycle repair class at the bike shop in my neighborhood. Which sentence would best resolve this series of events in a descriptive narrative? I can proudly say that I now know exactly what to do when I hear the rickety clanging of a loose bicycle chain. My fingers and clothing were covered with sticky, black grease as I walked my busted bicycle all the way home. I took a class at a bike shop to learn about bicycles. All of a sudden, I heard a loud clanging sound.
Beginning: The chain on my bike became loose while I was riding with my friends. Middle: My friends and I tried to fix the chain, but we just made the problem worse. End: I took a bicycle repair class at the bike shop in my neighborhood.
