Dark Romantics explored the darker side of the human soul.
Answer:
Even though this question is missing the options, after analyzing the revision we can safely say it was made for <u>conciseness</u>.
Explanation:
Conciseness can be simply defined as saying a lot in just a few words. Notice how the original paragraph is much longer than the revised one. The writer gave much more information than what was truly necessary. Details such as "and that new procedures need to be initiated" and "who was sympathetic" are superfluous. The first one adds nothing of value. If the procedures are inadequate, it is quite obvious that new ones need to be initiated. Readers could infer that. The second one is permeated with subjectivity, not only making the paragraph longer, but also stating an opinion that in uncalled for in this context. By eliminating the extra words, the writer made the paragraph concise, using fewer words to express the necessary.
Answer:
He bumps into Jordan Baker.
Aggregation - a group of things that have been brought together
Degradation - making something weaker or of less importance
Indignantly - feeling angry at something that you view as unfair
Infallible - Incapable of doing something wrong
A warrant is an underlying assumption or inference that the writer takes for granted.
