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m_a_m_a [10]
3 years ago
10

Can you plz revise this sentense

English
1 answer:
yuradex [85]3 years ago
7 0

the rest is good besides the stuff at the bottom

Explanation:

mixed mixed the second and third sentence instead of a period on the second sentence do a comma. for for the sentence she became involved with theater mix it with the next sentence with a comma instead of a period.

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