2 and 4 are both strong. It is clear what is going to be discussed especially on 4. Two is very intreging. It would be nice to see how that will develop. By that it would be interesting to see how those two ideas will be tired together.
One is too vague. It's true, but where are you going with that? Some indication has to be given.
Three has the same problem. Bad? What does bad mean? I may be wrong, but I think a thesis statement, if at all possible, should use concrete nouns. There should be no doubt about where this is going.
This is just an example of what I mean
Throughout history, every time a new technology was developed, it was immediately used in war. I think both 2 and 4 do something like that.
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1 weak
2 strong
3 weak
4 strong
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<u>~Male Y/n here~ I would think what the authors tone in "The Night The bell fell" is sarcastic, because they are they are saying it oppositely of what the relay mean in the viewpoint.</u>
<u>(</u>Hope this helps!)
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When Peter’s father volunteers to go to war, Peter must give up the fox he has raised since it was a kit. Peter wars with himself as he feels guilty for abandoning his friend.
