Example of a sentence that most needs to be revised because it's description is too vague is : we hike two miles uphill in the blooming forest.
Usually, you hike on the mountain not in the blooming forest.
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Nobody is discriminated against in terms of the law, and no choices will be made based off of one's individual difference.
Raise and butcher human babies, the number of souls in this kingdom being usually one million and half..
