Logos<span> is an appeal to logic and is a way of persuading an audience by reason.</span>
The meaning of the three words at the end of your question are:
- Receptacle: a container or device, something that receives or holds something. [In this case, it refers to how a churchyard only keeps hold of dead bodies and nothing else.]
- Consummation: the end, the conclusion of something. [It was gratifying to finally have reached the objective after enduring so much pain.]
- Obliterated: something that has been erased from memory. [The revelation was so inmense that all the work done to achieve the results was suddenly forgotten.]
Answer: You should try to use stronger word and don't repeat about how she is loyal or always stays with you more then once. You should always express you feeling about when you're with her. Lastly, try putting another time when something happen so another personal experience with your dog. I hope this helps :)