There is a slight error in the title of this question :)
Instead of ‘if my dad would let me’, it’s ‘had my dad let me (remember this useful phrase ending). This is because you can’t have a double ‘would’ in the same phrase.
In the introduction, when your introducing the main topic, aka thesis statement
Explanation:
writing the important things down that happened. (if they are long summarize them down into smaller sentances but still explain the importance of it.)
They: evoke an emotional response, appeal to the readers' sense of logic, and also help the reader avoid seeming biased to readers. Rhetorical appeals use pathos, logos, and ethos to persuade the reader.
