1st paragraph:
i do believe it was worth it cause education is something important that we should all have as we get older,and to me what malala is brave to do most people would have backed down.Education gives us a knowledge of the world around us and changes it into something better. It develops in us a perspective of looking at life.It helps us build opinions and have points of view on things in life and this is why i believe education is worth fighting for.
2st paragraph:
Because some people can just be naive,jealous, or just have a bad heart for others that what to succeed,or cause if they didn't do it they don't what you to do.They just want to to fail with them.
i hoped i helped you:D
私はエイリアンです
: Watashi wa eirin desu : Saya adalah eirin
Koreksi
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seharusnya
私はエーリアンです : Watashi wa eerin desu
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D as you have to state them to begin with, don’t just skip the introduction
