As well as you write, you don't need anyone to point out dialog for you. I think you want to say that it is a morality tale. And that's the only thing I found to change. You have certainly defended your point well enough: your point is well taken. After he is shown his own death, there is no where for him to go. He can choose to ignore the message of the spirits, or he can take Morley's warning. His choice.
Look in your book to see which part shows this exactly. According to what you have written, it would be where he begs the spirit to say that it is not so. He asks if these are the things that must be, or can they be altered. He is truly terrified at that point, and that's what you need to quote.
Girl we need some more context
Me. I will walk up to you
True, the image does create bias.
<span>In the first stanza of James Russel Lowell's poem 'Life', the speaker compares life to a leaf of white paper where each one of us may write. What the author was trying to say is that each living person has the same opportunity at birth, that is, we all have life, what we choose to do with our lives is the information that we put on the white paper.</span>
