Hi I think you did a pretty good job on this, but as you know nothing is perfect!
I would recommend adding more transitions, ending it with something more special, use more advanced words than the basic ones, more parallelism and have a better intro but overall I think it's very lovely.
Also you could say something like "Today, I would like to thank all those incredible people who have helped me become who I am today and show my gratitude through this small essay/or whatever.
1. The appearance of....
2. Hamlet says he disapproves of...
3. Hamlet contemplates...
4. Hamlet verbally abuses...
5. Ophelia dies.
6. Laertes is killed in a...
7. Fortinbras takes over the...
Trust me this is all the Correct words!!!
Answer:
I am Confused can you make it bigger
Explanation:
Thaks
