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yes it's good and I like how you rhyme. keep up the great job:) don't listen to others but if someone and another of others say sum don't take it the wrong way take it as a feedback to know what's wrong with your poem!!!
Best friend is the gift from our god.We love them & they love us.We would love to spend our time with them.They will be there with us in our bad times.They are our treasure in our life.
No one should be charged for education
The cost of education should be zero
Education should be free of charge
Education must be gratis
How can someone answer your question when you dont say what passage it is from
The correct answer is sentence number 3 ("As a young man, he decided to become a doctor and pursue a life of healing and comforting").
In this paragraph we're introduced to Doctor Henderson, some of his good qualities, and the impact that his death has made in the community of Battle Creek, Michigan.
If we analyse the <u>logical progression</u> of the paragraph, <u>sentence number 3 seems to be out of place.</u> Talking about what his aspirations were as a young man, right after speaking of his death and before stating he will be remembered dearly, feels like <u>an interruption in the flow of the paragraph and a deviation of the main theme</u> which is the impact of his loss on the community.
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